User talk:Info/Sandbox/NPC Spoilers

Possible edits will happen because yes.

Go ahead. I'm just hoping I didn't miss anything.

Your problem is the inability to cut things out. kek.

E-ehh...? :C

I'm guessing you got lazy and/or forgot.

Also, I made a typo with Young Tarlach: episode 2, I misspelled Berched -> Berches.

I forgot.

Zzzz I suppose I'll double back, strip the things that are pretty much considered irrelevant. Things like the Drunkard I thought was relevant since he provided a very small clue about Tarlach whereas no one in Qilla did, and things like Merlin and TH bickering are moreso related to the character but as you pointed out it's largely irrelevant.

But we all know Saga 2 is incredibly messy and confusing hellhole... :/

Could have gotten much worse...

Tell yourself these as you cut things down.

1. Is this relevant to the plot?
2. Is this what a person would want to know to understand the plot?

The latter especially, because it's where you lack. Anyone reading spoilers here would probably care less about small details, what they want to know is the generic idea of what happened and understand it.

OTL I hate Saga 2 so much...

“	Tarlach unwilling to follow the group, wishing to stay with Kristell the group decides to complete her errands.	„
—Merlin, Episode 1

Pretty sure this is grammatically incorrect.

Saga 2 first half, never again.

I'll go around to actually fixing that...soon.

/never/

If you're tired/lazy stripping things, I can fix it through my sandbox.

Avelin had another partner before Talvish. But he/she went away for some reason.

Then in Continued Battle, Avelin talks about not wanting to have an injured teammate(telling the Milletian to go take a rest), at least not again. Implying something very specific.

Also, Alban Knights work in a team of three.

Thanks. I'm waiting for a youtube video to appear so I can re-read the whole dialogue again.

Someone seems to be working on dialogue, so you might not have to. Script - Generation 19: The Divine Knights