Gonna start moving these

Possible edits will happen because yes.

Go ahead. I'm just hoping I didn't miss anything.

Your problem is the inability to cut things out. kek.

E-ehh...? :C

I'm guessing you got lazy and/or forgot.

Also, I made a typo with Young Tarlach: episode 2, I misspelled Berched -> Berches.

I forgot.

Zzzz I suppose I'll double back, strip the things that are pretty much considered irrelevant. Things like the Drunkard I thought was relevant since he provided a very small clue about Tarlach whereas no one in Qilla did, and things like Merlin and TH bickering are moreso related to the character but as you pointed out it's largely irrelevant.

But we all know Saga 2 is incredibly messy and confusing hellhole... :/

Could have gotten much worse...

Tell yourself these as you cut things down.

1. Is this relevant to the plot?
2. Is this what a person would want to know to understand the plot?

The latter especially, because it's where you lack. Anyone reading spoilers here would probably care less about small details, what they want to know is the generic idea of what happened and understand it.

OTL I hate Saga 2 so much...

“	Tarlach unwilling to follow the group, wishing to stay with Kristell the group decides to complete her errands.	„
—Merlin, Episode 1

Pretty sure this is grammatically incorrect.

Saga 2 first half, never again.

I'll go around to actually fixing that...soon.

/never/

If you're tired/lazy stripping things, I can fix it through my sandbox.