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Fragment of a discussion from User talk:Info

By that I mean your way of writing.

 
 
They fought for us,
 

 

First off, you should say Humanity, not necessarily "us". Avoid words such as "I", "we", "me", etc. Keep yourself out of it. Treat the reader as somebody neutral, uninvolved.

 
 
Kobolds are also infantry but also possess "lesser" technology,
 

 

That's opinionary Avoid opinions as well.



Also, try not to say words such as "can't", "don't", "I'll". Separate them to cannot, do not, I will. (Well, as I said, avoid "I"s. =P)

 
 
The "Ogre" Titan is actually a Cyclops but it is not labeled as one.
 

 

It has one eye, and it's called an Ogre Titan, that does not necessarily make it a Cyclops. Not everything large with one eye is considered a cyclops.

 
 
You may not believe it, but Fomorians were the ones who invented beer!
 

 

Don't speak directly to the reader. This is fine if your using it as your user page, but shouldn't be considered data.

Pyro - (Talk)01:53, 7 July 2011