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Homestead

Homestead

The main reason I undid all the changes is because the first one was simply wrong (and I'd have to manually add in your grammar changes that I don't agree with).

Regarding the grammar changes, something like "Leveling up to 13 takes 5 hours using 637 Homestead Stones to make 91 Scarecrows" is about as close to a run-on sentence as you can get without actually breaking any rules. There's no commas and lots of prepositions and gerunds. It's not more concise at all.

Doomsday31415 (talk)‎08:23, 31 December 2014

Hopefully you'll find the current version better.

Lionheart (talk)‎06:01, 3 January 2015

You mean the current version with my changes being the most recent?

I left the reasons for the changes in the log.

Doomsday31415 (talk)‎10:05, 3 January 2015

Oh, then I assume you do find them better, then. :)

Lionheart (talk)‎10:25, 3 January 2015

Indeed.

The better question is whether you're okay with them.

Also, do you understand why I want "you" removed?

Doomsday31415 (talk)‎10:34, 3 January 2015
 
 
 
 
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